I am a Year 7 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi Devaani, That was fun!What is the app called? I like the way you had the strong beats and went up and down in between. Try to remember your capital letters and full stops every time you write...it will help you. "Hi,it is Devaani. I have a video about an app. I'm in it." Thanks for blogging again :)
This is a great piece of work Devaani but what work is it in relation too?.It would be great if you could put a title up and tell the reader a little bit about why you were making this. I do like the beat that you have.It's kind of cool!.
Hi Devaani,
ReplyDeleteThat was fun!What is the app called?
I like the way you had the strong beats and went up and down in between.
Try to remember your capital letters and full stops every time you write...it will help you. "Hi,it is Devaani. I have a video about an app. I'm in it."
Thanks for blogging again :)
This is a great piece of work Devaani but what work is it in relation too?.It would be great if you could put a title up and tell the reader a little bit about why you were making this.
ReplyDeleteI do like the beat that you have.It's kind of cool!.
Hello Devaani.
ReplyDeleteI am just leaving a comment to let you know that I have had a look at your blog today.
Hello Devaani.
ReplyDeleteJust a comment to let you know that I have had a look at your blog today.