Alliteration

 hello my readers,

We have been using our language feature to write recounts. We have learnt lots of language features and we need to get used to using them. 

These are the language features we have been learning about.

1. Onomatopoeia - ‘Bang’
2. Metaphor - “You are the sun!’
3. Personification “The clouds danced across the sky.”
4. Hyperboles - “I was so embarrassed I would have stuck my head in the toilet to hide.”
5. Alliteration - “It was time for super Sunday sports.”
6. Dialogue - “Don’t move,” Ellenessa whispered.

We planned our writing my writing down. Who? How? Where? Why? When? What?

We highlighted the bullet point that we were going to use language feature like this:

Then we wrote our language feature. here is a part of my story. I haven't finished it yet but this is the start.

When Winter sports was over I was not happy. But I had a cool coach her name was Aid. in are team was Khiel, sean, Jade, Marvin, Venice and Hamish. they are a cool team. But what I hat is when the ball hets you fat my team Scream AAAAHH.

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